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Zika Chronicles: Prologue

Posted by Mizox - December 24th, 2008


John Balga was not happy.
Balga was Vice-President of Epsilon Corp. in charge of research and development of destructive technologies, as he had been for 10 years. His job largely consisted of finding mentally-unstable individuals and giving them large grants of money with which they could recreate their nightmares, often without their knowledge.
"I don't think you fully understand the point of our activities here." he said to the newly-transferred employee. "We're supposed to fix the lottery so the crazy ones win, not so some mad old lady can install land mines on her property!"
The man sighed, he'd been transferred from the genetics experimentation facility for feeling too much sympathy towards the experiments.
"But Mister Balgo sir" he said, "the land mines were quite destructive."
"But not, you will find, very innovative." replied Balgo. "Now, I understand you have found another candidate? One who is actually promising?"
"Yes sir, 18 year old sir, mostly keeps to himself and hardly ever says what he's thinking. Very promising young man I thought, he just bought a powerball ticket"
"Well then go and see to it that he wins! This is your last chance Johnson, I hope for your sake that it proves a success."
Johnson ran off, thankful that he was still alive, he didn't know what would happen to him should he fail again, and he prayed he would never have to find out.


Comments

This is actually not too bad.
Once you expand on it and develop the plot more, it should be pretty good.
Nice one, mizox!

chapter 1 coming when I get bored with a completely unrelated comic I'm working on